Cross Country - Fun Run
Th rest of us who were not serious and were happy to just get out and have a good time went off in our year levels (first, second and third place were still important).
There was a big puddle that we had fun playing in. One of the little kids lost their shoe and it took us a while to find it. We also had mud fights. It was heaps of un. We were also sponsered and were raising funds for our end of year mystery bus tour. On the last day we of school we get on a bus and have a suprise fun day to end the year.
Hi my name is Joy from W.I.S and I think that it is really neat that you did the fun run, and I really wish that I was there running through the mud. It looks really fun to be going through mud. I wish we could do that at W.I.S
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Victoria from W.I.S and i think that this was really good because it looks like you guys are having fun rolling rounding and splashing in the mud and it is awesome that you did the fun run . I wish use all the best .
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Jahnae and I am from Wesley Intermediate.
ReplyDeleteI think it is Great yous did a Fun Run for the kids, because most kids find running not so fun(Non-Serious Runner).
I think you should add more punctuation because the only punctuation I see is is a full stop.
But yous still did a great job.
looks like you guy's had fun doing cross country and it's funny that you got muddy but at less you had fun
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Zhyon and i go to Kawakawa Primary School,i am a year 8 and i relay like what you tell me about this story and very funny how you guys ran through mud and slipped up and i was very interesting how you guy described about how yous had fun and at least yous had fun
ReplyDeleteHI my name is Tremaine I go to Kawakawa primary.I am a year 8 and I really like the way you got muddy and really getting in there .Its good that yous are doing this.That shoe looked muddy as i wish there i like getting muddy.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Tahnellah and I go to KawaKawa Primary School and I am a year 8. I like how you guys had fun when use were doing cross country.I like how use had fun in the mud I kinda of felt sorry for those shoes but the rest was kinda of funny.
ReplyDeletehi i'm robin,great to know you had fun,sorry about the shoe
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Noah im form Gilberthorpe school in christchurch I like how you planned the theme and that. why did the cross country
ReplyDeleteinvolve mud? I think next time you should try and improve the writing and also the word fun in your blog post is un instead of fun so you need to change it to fun thats all from me Bye!
Hi my name is Angus and i am from in Ara tu whakata gilberthorpe in chisterch and I like how you put lots of photos and I look like you had lots of fun doing you cross counter maybe next time you should look back to check your mistakes because there was un not fun so and look at Te Ropu whakamenawa blog.BLOG YOU LATER!!!!
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